The picture is great. Your perspective is perfect and you can feel a sense of free-fall just looking at it.
The poem is good too, but it feels more like it is saying, "You have to hit rock bottom before you can start again." I feel that this picture represents freedom, a care free nature. This is a poem i wrote after looking at this picture.
Descent
To know the earth, To know the sky. To know the power of in between, The power of freedom, of choice. Now it is my turn to know that power. Now I begin my descent.
And that's my poem. I'm also posting it on my deviant page. let me know what you think.
the rhythm and flow to this picture is amazing! the lettering at the bottom, the name on the left and the overall picture is amazing! great job pulling it off.
Wow. That is great effects you put in there. Really brought him out. I also like the poem following it. Great job on it. Really tells what the picture is about. [Sorry for being so late to respond to this. Just been hectic for me irl.]
The poem is good too, but it feels more like it is saying, "You have to hit rock bottom before you can start again." I feel that this picture represents freedom, a care free nature. This is a poem i wrote after looking at this picture.
Descent
To know the earth,
To know the sky.
To know the power of in between,
The power of freedom, of choice.
Now it is my turn to know that power.
Now I begin my descent.
And that's my poem. I'm also posting it on my deviant page. let me know what you think.
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Let it be.