Descend

The picture is great. Your perspective is perfect and you can feel a sense of free-fall just looking at it.

The poem is good too, but it feels more like it is saying, "You have to hit rock bottom before you can start again." I feel that this picture represents freedom, a care free nature. This is a poem i wrote after looking at this picture.

Descent

To know the earth,
To know the sky.
To know the power of in between,
The power of freedom, of choice.
Now it is my turn to know that power.
Now I begin my descent.

And that's my poem. I'm also posting it on my deviant page. let me know what you think.